Strengths: We believe that our pitch was detailed and covered all the areas we needed to. Our main strength was our film research and showing what we have learned from it. Films such as American Psycho (Harron, 2000) and Memento (Nolan, 2000) were key influences for us, and we showed in the pitch how we are going to implement parts of these films into our opening. Additonally, another strength was our plot. We demonstrated our convoluted plot in the pitch and it received a positive feedback.
Weaknesses: Our main weakness was not producing photos from a reccie. Showing these photos would have given the audience a greater understanding of our location, while also helping them to visualise our story. Also, our treatment could have been refined, with the key points to our plot shown, instead of large amounts of writing. This would have enabled this part of the pitch to proceed quicker, to save time to expand on other parts of our pitch
From this, we have learned the importance of planning our work thoroughly. In the future, we will time our presentation to ensure that an even amount of time is spent on each topic we speak about, while this will also give us a stronger indication of how long our presentation will be. We will continue to research thoroughly for future presentations, because this was a significant reason why our pitch was deemed successful by the audience.
No comments:
Post a Comment